Reviews for Softer Stuff
Jezsh chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
I really liked how you mix tenses and the poem comes full circle. Nice!

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fullofflame chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
I love the last two lines, you ended very strongly.
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
in all honesty the writing seem a little choppy, I'm a big fan of your work but this isn't your best. u have a very creative idea but for a free poem its lacking some major flow. I love the ending though, all poems should end strong yours clearly does. "But that was a lifetime ago,

When I was made of softer stuff." its a true beautiful line.