Reviews for Softer Stuff |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked how you mix tenses and the poem comes full circle. Nice! If you've time, check out my poetry blog too: onemorelittleline. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the last two lines, you ended very strongly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() in all honesty the writing seem a little choppy, I'm a big fan of your work but this isn't your best. u have a very creative idea but for a free poem its lacking some major flow. I love the ending though, all poems should end strong yours clearly does. "But that was a lifetime ago, When I was made of softer stuff." its a true beautiful line. |