Reviews for Simpleton
barfuss chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Your poem is amazing. There is just so much honesty and truth in it.

I guess it's a feeling many people have felt in one variation or another. Wheather it's hiding simple behind complicated, somber behind sweet, insecurity behind rationality... It's kind of hiding one aspect of your personality but in the end you still feel hurt that people can't see the real you behind that mask. Even though you were the one hiding it in the first place... Or something like that. I don't really seem to find the right words...

Anyways, thank you for sharing your thoughts!

And also, thank you so much for reviewing my poem! It means a lot to me to know someone enjoyed reading it!

SargentLooneyPencil chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Call me Vin.. :).. Loved the poem btw.. Cute and meaningful. The perfect package! Well done!
Ahrlaedrin chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
I'm a complicated simplicity, I agree that hiding behind a mask of complexities is such a bore.

To be honest, being simple is more than being complicated, because there is a lot of complication in simplicities, but we just can't see it yet.

I like this, because I can fit with it, personally.


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