Reviews for Goldylox's Poem
Goldylox chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
Well, N, if you're talking about me, then I'm probably not who you think I am.

But, if that was about some other comment she made about whoever you were talking about...well...that really has nothing to do with your review, now does it.
N chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Huh. That makes me feel... Idk? Is that person supposed to be the one we conference with at times? AW? The one who definitely hates me? I wonder why.. Well. I don't exactly love her to death either. The poem puts things into a more "crystal clear perspective" I guess.
Michael Kelso chapter 1 . 4/10/2011
I liked your poem, it had a good rythym, but you were rhyming every other line, then did 2 in a row. The rest were every other line.

"Relax we aren't lesbian" and "We are just really good friends" could be replaced with one line that rhymes with 'hers'. Perhaps...

"Our friendship is deeper than words."

These are just my observations, take them for what they're worth.
Goldylox chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
I LOVE IT!

And it's totaly true!

ILY x3!

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I think I made my point clear there. .