|Reviews for 0200 Hours, No Clouds, New Moon, Bright Stars|
| theimpossiblegirl chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Oh scaryness, you should make it into a longer story or something.
| Scribbification chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
Whoa, wait, stop. I'm confuzzled. The guy appears to be some kind of vampire-werewolf hybrid, and "I" appears to be in on it. The assistant dies. Why does "I" (apologize for the grammar) reach her hand below the hem of her skirt?
It's probably obvious - I know I tend to overthink things, and I'm probably being a dumbass as well, but...
Very good and descriptive over all!
| slave to the voices chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Wow! Morbidly descriptive and twisted. I really like this and hope there's more. I noticed a couple of grammar problems (it was just him, me(,) and the subject.) and (digging i(t)s broken nails(,) like claws(,) into his...) Minor problems that didn't slow the flow. Great job, keep writing!