Reviews for Confetti Lies
Evilives chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
I like the way you handled the way some people lie about things that shouldn't be lied about. And how some people are much too obliged to lie back. LIES LIES LIES!
Adrenalin chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
I liked how you treated the subject of lying about loving someone here. It's not something I've seen often in poetry (but that might be only because I haven't read a lot of it) so I was attracted by the novelty.

I also liked that it reads almost like prose poetry (I'm very fond of Baudelaire's Paris Spleen) but I'm not sure that was the effect you tried to achieve. If you didn't wanted it to be a prose poem, I'd say it lacks some rhythm.

I was a little sidetracked by the congregation bit too, because I wasn't sure you meant that the characters belonged to that congregation or if you only used it to design the persons attending the funeral.