Reviews for Envy
MagicPen811 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Forgot to add something: I like how you brought all the emotions into this poem. This was how my friend was feeling. Great poem. Loved it!
MagicPen811 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Cute poem. I liked it. Thumbs up!
Ahrlaedrin chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
What a depressing little truth about love at times. Love ... really is depressing, isn't it? You try to figure out how it works, but you just can't find out any forms of it.

Jealousy, anger, remorse, regret...

These all are but a stage of love, something that we try to delude ourselves into believing that is love; but it isn't, it's just a test.

And most of the times, we don't pass it.

Sargentlooneypencillazy2login chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
I love it! I think that's how many peope feel... it's amazing how yu capture the emotions and stuff them in a poem! Great job! Loved it and i still do! :D
Jezsh chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
Interesting work. I don't know if it's autobiographical, but if so then it's very insightful. I like how you acknowledge your own faults but also allow the reader to empathise without excusing the behaviour. I hope you keep writing!

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