|Reviews for Violet Saga: Year 1|
| Rhocar chapter 3 . 5/29/2011
Still thoroughly enjoying this. Was going to comment that a five year old would not be able to read the letters from her parents herself, perhaps if the power of writing became the power of literacy then it would encompass reading and writing
Well done, no more today, got to do a few chores etc. I gather by now the you have figured out my comment to chapter two was the word ladder not letter
| Rhocar chapter 2 . 5/29/2011
Again I love it.
Couple of little points the word 'latter' I think is supposed to be letter (getting it from its hiding spot)
Just a little note could a five year old give such directions as upstairs second door on the left - maybe just upstairs
Looking forward to continuing on
| Rhocar chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
Wow, this is an intense beginning you have got my attention, will try to read at least one chapter a day to review for you.
I am not sure whether I have asked if English is a second language for you, there are a couple of little slip ups they may just be translation, and one word 'after' appears to be missing the 'r' at the end. I think there are three or four snippets that don't look like they have translated properly(nothing major).
Looking forward to continuing on, as I said great beginning, love the response to the red block, and your explanation of why seems so real for a small child.