Reviews for Glass Heart
WereMagi - Death's Messenger chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
"Scars cut deep,

deep to the heart,

and deeper still to the soul.

In its place,

that lovely shaped glass,

is now a darkness, with a little

flame within a diamond.

Its what I felt should of been added on to it. Its a nice poem, something I properly would of wrote if the motivation got me. You captured the moments well, with people thinking they can hold onto things, and that scars wanting to heal but never do.

WereMagi

PS. Was it something personal or motivation or just a stray thought that prompted you to write this?