|Reviews for Long dead|
| The Folk Extraction chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
Nice, I love how you used the repetition of the phrase 'long dead'at the end of each section, it really added something to the whole piece. Great work.
| Michael Kelso chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
You described loss very well, but I was unsure if you were talking about actual death, or merely separation. I can say that being someone who has lost my closest friend to death, your first verse captures many of the feelings that I have gone through, and captures them well. Your chorus also expresses the pain of separation very well.
I really liked the line "you've ripped off my heart's band aid."
Kudos to you to being able to share such feelings. I have written a few songs about my loss, but they are too personal for me to share just yet.