Reviews for The Trial and Judgement of Miss Laura Edwards
ShortcakeMattie chapter 1 . 4/10/2011
I like how you keep throwing the readers twists throughout the entire story. Your description of the mansion was well written and gave me a clear image. It hinted of darkness and secrets, which left me wondering what happens next. The ending brings up a good point. Does anybody really have the right to judge another? You captured the voice of a sad young woman, struggling to overcome her own battles. Well done. I know the status said complete, but were you possibly writing a longer story? Something in the end gave me the feeling that you were going to add more?