Sounds cool. I'm also doing a story on the Zodiac, so I was seeing what other ideas people had. Your story sounds very intriguing, I'll be sure to read all of it.

Wicked story! I was just reading and it said you needed a title. How does: '12 warriors of the stars' sound? I think it sounds pretty cool :) anyway good luck with the story and all!

I don't know why more people haven't reviewed! This is an amazing idea! I can't wait to read the rest (especially Leo because I myself am one!) your style is unique and intriguing! It's very descriptive! I hope you continue the story! By the way I was just wondering if it'd be okay if I could draw pictures to go with the story. You can find me on fanfiction under that name tehchessie or even here I think under the same name..again your story is amazing, can't wait for the next chapter!

~chessie

i think you should write a full novel based on this story... it will be quite good... you casn invent on the way...