Reviews for Captured! |
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![]() ![]() The last chapter wasn't bad. Though this chapter was more interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it but im just a little confused who was the guy that invaded her personal space? |
![]() ![]() This story seems really good. However it could use some editing, most of what I noticed was letters that should be capitalized, aren't and some missing spaces. I'm looking forward to where this story is going. |