Reviews for To Be A Friend
Loqwell chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
This poem made me smile. I think my favourite line was "Add in a few fights, a couple of tears" because it made the poem seem less like a simple fluffy ode to friendship, and more like a recipe of everything. :] However the line "But strong memories of the good times" doesn't quite fit. Perhaps replacing "strong" with "don't forget", or the "but" to an "and" would help it.

Loqwell