Reviews for and in this room
punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
This is good. I like the second stanza, about setting the scene. I also like the second to last stanza, and I feel like that might make a better ending to the poem. It ends well as it is, though. That's just my own personal opinion.

Anyway, I do really like this, thanks for posting.

qubed chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
they taste bitter, and savory.

sour. translucent.