Reviews for I am a Candle
aswedreds chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
It's a powerful metaphor for what drives us and fuels us. I love it.
DarkShadow2012 chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
i love how so much is conveyed through so little lines. just goes and says how much talent you got. the imagery is so well thought of. its just wonderful.

-Darkshadow
D.J Wu chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
Ok, so at this point I'm really getting jealous of your ability to write these short masterpieces ;-) Seriously though, this is great and it conveys a lot of emotion. I've always been of the opinion that conveying raw emotion was better than perfect form in poetry.
whisper.me.sweet chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
wow i love this. i think the shortness of this adds to the effect and imagery of it so you can actually see that the candle is smaller and you're smaller and the actual poem is smaller. i really like it