Reviews for Spidergirl
siriuslyobsesed chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
erm. wow.

lost for words.

that's was so cool, in the sadistic sort of way! :')

just wow. xD
SimonClemens chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Awesome concept. I thought this would be a sappy tragedy...

Not so much. Vivid, sad and a tad creepy.
The Folk Extraction chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
This is awesome! I love the whole metaphor weaved into it, and the repetition of the line 'I'm holding my boyfriend's hand' was brilliant, especially with how you tied it in at the end. Also, you're very good at keeping a steady rhythm and rhyme scheme which makes it very easy and pleasant to read. GO TALENT!
skersey chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Haha you're going to have nightmares? I've got a giant spider to fight :)

But this is a very interesting concept. Wanting love so much that it begins to eat at you...literally, and beginning to hurt you love the most by sapping everything. It's also quite vivid! I like!

ps: Your pic is really cute. It encapsulates the evil in the world quite well :)