Reviews for The Alternator
Tyler chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Very well-written and suspenseful. This would make a great short film.
sinead49 chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
Oh, I like this! I'm kind of a sucker for 1984 type stories, so I'm curious to see where this one goes. Is this the last we'll see of S and M, or will the story focus on them and their journey? I'll be waiting to find out!

Best of luck,

sinead49
Fakety Mcfakename chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
what is the purpose of the alternator? what's it's MO? a very interesting story, i love how you played down the free will thing to a choice in desserts.