Reviews for Haiku Harbour
Thenardier chapter 19 . 6/11/2011
A very powerful statement succinctly wrapped up in a haiku.
Thenardier chapter 11 . 6/11/2011
It's when a haiku is at it's simplest that's when it becomes most effective. You've demonstrated that here.
Thenardier chapter 9 . 6/11/2011
A rather nice read, but it would have benifitted much more with a proper use of punctuation
Thenardier chapter 8 . 6/11/2011
Extremely beautiful imagery used here
Thenardier chapter 4 . 6/11/2011
Simple, elegant and beautiful.
Thenardier chapter 3 . 6/11/2011
The usage of the word tongue does make the haiku a bit jarring to read as it seems out of place. I understand you meant language, but had to change it to fit the format. Nevertheless, the message is still heartfelt and brilliant
Astrocam89 chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
That was...depressing lol. But nice, I liked it.