Wow! I thought she was just interested in her teacher I didn't even think that she wanted revenge I guess her paper should have had a clue but wow I loved it seriously it was great. :-)

Hm, I am not sure if there is anything much I can offer as a review. The title was generic, and I think something more encompassing might elicit more response, than just "School." But, I understand wanting to not give away the synopsis in the title.

Also, there were a few grammar mistakes. The only one I can really recall off handedly is, in the third paragraph. You spelled "heel" as "heal" which, I'm sure you know is two different words.

Now that I think of it, this is rather reminiscent of a movie called "Hard Candy" with Ellen Page. I think the dialogue between the characters could use a little more work, especially near the climax area.

Otherwise, the content was good.

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Well... I didn't see that coming. Well done. Really got me.