|Reviews for Collected|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
Hard and paining :-( i have gone through similar thoughts. Though i have been the one thinking and my gf the object. Wonderfully effective. :-)
| Moonlight Mistress chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
I really enjoyed the last line. You should always be careful with who you give your second chances to. That's always the tricky part. One suggestion, in the third stanza, last line it would be "if you had this carefully planned". That abbreviation doesn't work in that context.
| Drops of Jewpiter chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
I really like the opening of your fourth stanza