Emma must be the girl that the man fought for.

The man is Blaze.

like it..But it feel weird as Blaine seems to be very old than her..Why does most of these supernatural stories follow the twilight kind of pattern in age difference?

This is a sweet and fierce story. Thank you.

Sebastian the wolf huh ... okY IM LATE

Still an awesome story

It was really great! I love your writing stile its so inspirational!

I like the fact that you've given Emma an occupation that heroines do not usually have in fictional stories. Normally they're so absorbed in politics, or in the plot, or in a fancy job, that they seem almost surreal. Emma is very grounded and I like that about her.
As an English native, I also like the accuracy with which you describe the British weather: fickle and dismal. While we get our share of sunshine, we also get more than our share of rain, thunder and snow.
I reiterate; Blaze is such a cutie. Licking off make-up. I had to laugh at that. He obviously knows what he wants in a woman. And trying to steal her sock. So cute. Reading the scenes in her bedroom and the bathroom made me cringe and grin at the same time, since we know that he's going to transform into a human and that he's witnessing these scenes with a human's intelligence (and lust). I feel kind of sorry for Emma but I can't wait until it comes to light that he isn't really a dog.
Great chapter and once again, awesome character development. You're making your characters real from the onset, which a lot of writers fail to do. Brava.

Great start to your story -a slower pace than I'm used to but you make it work. I noticed a few spelling mistakes and typos, such as 'pass' instead of 'past' and 'scarf' instead of 'scarves' but nothing major. I like your character development for Emma and her mother and Blaze is just a cutie. I'm going to head off to read Chapter 1 now. Toodles.

I only read the first chapter and I'm already so in love with this story! I just had to review :) I'm off to go read more! So glad I came across this!

Love this story. The only thing that concerns me is actually...the aging. Since Emma is bound to Blaine via blood does her aging slow as well? Is he going to have to watch age and die? If they have any children, how will they age? Will the be wolves as well or human? If Blaine is going to have to watch Emma die because she ages so much faster than he does, I feel so bad for him. It will be a difficult thing for him to do I am certain.

Lovely story. I think I'll take a peek at your next Dancing With Wolves story even though it appears as though it has not been updated in a while. Hopefully, your busy schedule has simply interfered with your writing time, and you hope to resume updates soon. ;)

Love this!

Cheesy end :-) but great story ;-)
Mira

Sweet story! They're perfect together! ;-)
Mira

It does sound cruel.. but interesting nonetheless! ;-)
Mira