Reviews for changling
iliads chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
I really like this, and I disagree with the previous reviewer. I think the lack of capitals adds to the effect, and I love your descriptions. "cherry bruise", "a paper lantern, a bright medallion" and "fit inside of an acorn" really stuck out to me. Very well done :)
Shards Of A Broken Mirror chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
This has a good feel for such a short story, but it's quite hard to read without the proper grammar in.