|Reviews for Where I stand|
| AdxMeliora chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
An accurate description of heartache. :)
You should try your hand at non-rhyming poetry! I see little hints of it already.
| maddie wilson chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
hey great story i like it :)
| thefaultinourpatronus chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
'Well ill just sit in my room sometimes...'
-Capitalization and punctuation missing in the "I'll"
I can't say I empathize with this, really, because I've never been in this situation. But judging by your other readers, they certainly can. The emotion towards the end was really nicely portrayed, great job!
Btw, thanks for your review on my story! This was the returned review (:
| Sotrue chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
This is so true... Really good poem(:
| Insert a Catchy Penname Here chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
:O OMG! This is, like, almost JUST like I felt about a boy who's now my boyfriend. :) Perfect job, just beautiful!
| ochoujcoiwjseolcdjsncnsdm chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
So sad! I love this!
| EllezorPayne chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
This is so great! I hope you continue writing this. I kept smiling as I read all of it.
| frenchbeauty chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
But every time I seem to fine,
You are the one I can confide,
first line, what is it meant to be, find?
or seem to be fine?
anyways keep up the good work and keep writing
| ClaireJAngel chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
| Ann Lepson chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
I like this. :) lol
I really do! It reminds me of a Taylor Swift song in that: it's poetically direct, doesn't get clogged up in unneccessary descriptions or phrases, and it repeats over and over and over in your head. :)
| Taylor Wrote chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
This poem is really cute. It made me smile the whole time.
| SiriMelk chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
This poem was so good, my eyes started to sting a bit...(or maybe that's just me spending long hours on the computer all day today) anyway, I thought this to be really sweet. Good job! :D
| Palm Of Your Hand chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
Aw, this is good
| Read.Act.Sing.Swim chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
I think this poem was very true. The same thing happened to me…and it HURTS. Loved it!
| Rose Melissa Ivashkov chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
Wow. This is absolutely amazing and beautiful. So true! I love it!