Reviews for Better Than Water
Blind Justice chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
Love this! I'm usually not into poetry much, but this was especially good. It was almost like the vampire is torn between taking a life and giving into his / her own blood thirst. My favorite part was "Screams of pain and ... ECSTACY". I like how you put that word in all uppercase and gave it its own line. Nice!
Pzychotic chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Oooh this is super cool. Feels like I'm actually listening to a vampire talk :)
TheShadow666 chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Ah sweet thi poem based on a vampire is so kewl! And really good!
Neuravinci chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Oh yea! :)
illogicalThinker chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Well, it IS better than water.
HK Shmetty chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
Great! Especially the last two lines (I'm a sucker for rhymes). :)
Melusine Stafford chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
Uh... I like the passion in it, and the repitition adds to that. Lots of pictures and appealing to my senses...But the last part confuses me.

Am I just theme-challenged?