Reviews for Frosted Window
3M2R chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
just wondering, do you write your poems in word? If you do, i suggest you don't. because word has this automatic alteration which capitalizes the first letter of each line... which sometimes... no, often, isn't what poets intent to have.

Like in this poem, all the first letters of each line is capitalized and it's odd to read because of that.

anyhow, i still like the simplicity of the idea here, simple imagery, simple idea, simple. which makes it so deep because it's too simple for our minds to believe. beautiful~

fav:

'Magic should come to life/ In a world deprived of it/ Such glorious madness'

and

'The magic/ Seems to glow/ But fade/ In the ignorance/ We've so carelessly/ Let go'
FixitfelixJRJRJR chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
I like the concept behind this poem, but you really take advantage of free verse. There isn't much flow, and it reads more like a story, but that's not exactly a bad thing. All in all, I think you did well.

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Apathetic Antichrist chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
I like this. Very thought-provoking. Hm...I might have a phobia for frosted windows now. I fear the things of the outside world. Lol, anyway, good job. Keep it up!