Reviews for Rise, Icarus, Rise
Soule Rellim chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
I quite loved this; its absolutely

beautiful and I love the flow of

your rhyming. And the final line

is a tad on the humorous side, which

was definitely enjoyable. Nicely done :)

gdssdgyyhvsfb chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
Aww... ,(
lymli chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
so sad the ending :( even the birds lose their wings in time.
The Crazy Cat Lady chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
The poem is nicely rhymed. I like the tone of the poem; it's very strong. I especially like how you described Icarus's flight as if he was flying toward "Saturn's rings." The last line caught me off guard which I found it to be humorous in a way.
4 the dragonhearted girl chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Oh this is beautiful and sad at the same time. I recognized the name in the title Icarus's father was the one who built the labyrinth. This was a great poem, I love the change of emotions from whens he's flying to when he's falling