This is such a great one shot, very cute! I really enjoyed it especially the fact that you don't mention the word cliche (which is annoying), the cute nerdy girl, bad boy, also her brother's best friend and the spider part which made me LOL! I would've loved to see more chapter :) overall everyone should read this, if they're into the Jock/nerd stories, it's descriptive and enjoyable

this was great! well written and enjoyable.

dagnabbit im to late! if i was on time though i think i would have gone with rider and blaze. i love greyson and riley but im not sure what you would do now since they are already together... anyway. cant wait 2 see which one ya do).

I'd love to know what Rider's reaction to Grayson and Riley kissing is! Especially when he finds out that they're dating...

I think it'd be really interesting to know how Grayson and Riley's relationship plays out.

lol this is awesome! i love it. greyson and riley are cool and are cute together but i think rider is my favorite character;).

hahaha, Rider is really funny. you've already built great characters- i think this'll be an awesome story.

Very, very cute! I loved this :)

OHMYGOD, HAHAHAHA! Loved the last part! I love funny Rider. He and Blaze should marry each other.

Aw, Grayson so sweet, and Riley's definitely interesting.