Reviews for Starfish
Daily Dose of Awesome chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
Words cannot describe how much I love this poem. :D
Dreamers-Requiem chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Great poem; I loved the imagery you used throughout, it was really striking. I especially liked "I was never meant for hell or heaven" and "Under God we fall, Under the Devil we sleep." Great stuff, as always.
SettleThePetals chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
First off, I loved these lines:

"But Darling, I was never meant for hell or heaven"

"A vacuous existence, I forfeited all make-believe

the moment I realized that there never were

any stars in the goddamn sky"

Second: this reminds me of myself when I get mad and remind myself why I'm athiest. And it reminds me of fallen angels (my current obsession). A bit contradictory, I know...

but this was stunning :D

thanks for the great read!

cassandove chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
I've no idea what to say, really. This just... Stirs up so many emotions... I have to read it two or three more times, at least. But it's lovely.

So lovely.
The Folk Extraction chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
This is awesome! It's like someone having a mental breakdown just as they're about to die...I guess that would be the time to have a mental breakdown. Anyway, I love it! I love how it just keeps building up seeming more and more urgent until the very end.

They were all my favorite lines, but these ones were my favoritist: Under God we fall, Under the Devil we sleep;

it does not matter what time we keep-

Don't ask me why, just liked em best. This goes on my favorites for sure.