|Reviews for Starfish|
| Daily Dose of Awesome chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
Words cannot describe how much I love this poem. :D
| Dreamers-Requiem chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Great poem; I loved the imagery you used throughout, it was really striking. I especially liked "I was never meant for hell or heaven" and "Under God we fall, Under the Devil we sleep." Great stuff, as always.
| SettleThePetals chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
First off, I loved these lines:
"But Darling, I was never meant for hell or heaven"
"A vacuous existence, I forfeited all make-believe
the moment I realized that there never were
any stars in the goddamn sky"
Second: this reminds me of myself when I get mad and remind myself why I'm athiest. And it reminds me of fallen angels (my current obsession). A bit contradictory, I know...
but this was stunning :D
thanks for the great read!
| cassandove chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
I've no idea what to say, really. This just... Stirs up so many emotions... I have to read it two or three more times, at least. But it's lovely.
| The Folk Extraction chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
This is awesome! It's like someone having a mental breakdown just as they're about to die...I guess that would be the time to have a mental breakdown. Anyway, I love it! I love how it just keeps building up seeming more and more urgent until the very end.
They were all my favorite lines, but these ones were my favoritist: Under God we fall, Under the Devil we sleep;
it does not matter what time we keep-
Don't ask me why, just liked em best. This goes on my favorites for sure.