Reviews for The Invisible
AriaRose7 chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
Wow, that was really quite sad, but excellent writing. It gives us a different way of looking at real life situations. I felt bad for the boy at the end. The things people will do just to fit in and feel like they belong. I liked how you put this in poetry format but still told it as a story. It seemed quite fitting. Great job!
Venty chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
It's sad that this sort of thing really does happen in real life. People die or get injured for various reasons and most people either turn a blind eye or choose to dismiss it. I got a mixture of meanings from this but I guess the most important lesson is:

every life, no matter who or what they've done has value.

Good story.