|Reviews for water torture|
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
Powerful detail and imagry, I loved it, keep up the good work.
| Ca chapter 1 . 1/1/2004
well... its depressing :D
| Kentura Dragmire chapter 1 . 1/1/2004
This has a good rhythm. I don't really understand how water torture is really torture, though. I mean... It's just water. Maybe it's a psychology thing...
| Penny C. Lane chapter 1 . 5/25/2003
Wow, that sounds awful...and I thought listening to kelly osbourne sing was bad!
| empty account chapter 1 . 11/18/2001
| Ragdoll chapter 1 . 6/4/2001
This is tres bien!...are you in the UK?...you wrote a poem about dunblane so i wondered... anyway this poem gives a sense of continuing hurt and frustration...unfortunately i can identify with this all too well :( the way you express it and the short, shap rhyming is masterful!
| NightlySpooner chapter 1 . 5/24/2001
That made me feel happy! :D
| Kawaii Goddess chapter 1 . 5/23/2001
| Maria Gv chapter 1 . 5/22/2001
Another poem that reminds me of a song...well not a song on the radio just that this poem could be one. Interesting topic...the chinese torture thing! I loved it...liked the lines about life throwing darts at your heart...and then the tap running from the start and not stopping till it stops your heart. I really enjoy those lines the best...VERY GOOD POEM. Darkness is something that is needed everynow and then...or maybe that's just me. Anyways, I loved it!