Loved it so much. Wish there was more but I guess I'm gonna have to go read your other stories instead. Really lived the way you portrayed their chemistry very saucy lol. Look forward to seeing what else you have for me :)

Wow...that was so epic. I really wish I could write like that. Pretty sure I'm gunna binge read now and finish every chapter so addicted to this story. Can't wait to find out what happens next.

Woops! I kept referring to chapter 3 in my review, but I meant chapter 4! I just wanted to clarify! Again, I am enjoying this story so much; I can't wait to check out your other writing. I hope you have continued on with your talented craft!

-Kimberly
Indiana, United States

What?! You talk about how chapter 3 was awkward for the reader, and awkward for you to write, but...
it was UH-MAY-ZING!
As a brand new reader of fan fiction (please forgive me if/when I get the terminology lingo wrong!), obviously I'm new to FictionPress. I have only read about 20 stories or so. But I want to let you know that yours is, by far, the BEST! Storyline, character development, descriptions, tempo, etc are so impressive to me, and I'm only 3 chapters in! And, in my humble opinion, you are the best at writing a sensual scene. 'Chase' and 'Nala' have only kissed once, and spoken on the telephone, and yet those scenes were unbelievably 'breath-hitching-in-your-own-throat' and 'glad-nobody-is-in-the-room-while-you-are-reading-because-they-would-hear-your-own-breath-getting-ragged" sensually fantastic!
So, for what it's worth, don't feel intimidated. Your writing rocks!

LOVE THIS.

A really good and amazing story. It was hilarious and definitely sweet! Though, I would of liked it better if it was a bit toned down with the smut (like was made T) but you did warn us with the M rating. However, the plot and characters had a unique spin which I really enjoyed reading. Thanks

Really enjoyed this. Totally loved Chase, such a cute playful yet caring character. Would love to read a sequel on how he courts her.

. this is the third time i'm reading this Amazinggg story and i just cant get enough.
Nala and Chase are soo cute together.

I am so delighted to hear that you have decided to write a sequel. I always forgethow much I love this story until I read it again. It's one of the few stories I always come back to without fail. Thank you for writing such a masterpiece. You portrayed Chase and Nala beautifully. This story seems so realistic and that is what I love about it. I'll be waiting patiently for the sequel as I know it won't let me down. I'm so excited for it.

This is your second story that I read, after the tear-jerking story - The Pull of Destiny, that is.

I totally did not expect this story to be so intense! haha. Well, you obviously have mastered skill of describing passionate kiss (and the other 'things' as well).

I am glad that this story is quite light and entertaining with the tear-jerking drama out of sight. I hope you keep it like that, don't add TPOD-style drama to KBP if you ever decide to make sequel of KBP.

By the way, good luck with your school! I hope you can go through it well and can back to writing world asap :)

You are such a great writer and I think that you are amazing.

Amazing this was so much fun and laughs. Nala and Chase are so funny and cute together and their chemistry is off the charts...its so incredible.

These two are a mess and funny!

This is fantastic, i cant believe i just found this
So good.

Welp just reread this story and it only gets better!