I don't read M-rated anything but there's always a start. And this story is definately my many words explain this story. Addicting, sweet, delicious, hot and heavy... definataly heavy...

Anyways...Gah, thursday! Too long. But I guess I'll have to say goodbye to my new guilty pleasure. See you next week!

you are sooo evil! cutting it off like that! update soon! ;)

Hot indeed! I loved it! They're so perfect together and I think it's cute that he wanted to prolong their meeting by grabbing some food. I want things to work out between them... but Nala is being so stubborn. At least she came up with the bathroom idea, lol. This story rocks, can't wait to see what happens!

was waiting today for this chapter and finally! But no worries,it more than made up for it,i mean dayum!.it was crazy hot!.

Can't believe the next update is on long .but seriously,thanks for the awesomely long update. Looking forward to the next one.

WOW. So good! Another amazing updates from you... so so so good! Chase is so cute, I just want Nala to hug him and tell him how she feels about her. This emotional barrier she puts up is painful, and from how Chase talks to her and treats her and looks at her, it's so obvious how much he likes her, in a physical way and an emotional way. :(

And obviously that scene was ridiculously hot! I can't believe it ended there... can't wait for chapter nine to pick up where that ended off! :)

Happy writing! Looking forward to more of this story!

THAT. WAS. HOT!

PUH-leeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease let them have sex? !

1. Miss Nala needs to tell Chase that she does care about him and his personal life. Man, most girls would LOVE to have guys who talk to them. But, alas, I understand. She's scared and doesn't want this to turn out badly...

was so flipping hot and so flipping sweet.I love the way you write, omg

I hope you feel a lot better because migraines can really suck. I can't imagine trying to write with them, wow... And aww, look at Chase wheedling in a kiss in the phone transaction. He is so lovable, it's only a matter of time before Nala realizes that too, hehe. Off to read Chapter 8:)

These two together, even when they're just talking, is so so hot! I loved this chapter and the one before (glad you're feeling better!). I read through your chapters so slowly so I can savor them lol. Can't wait to read more...I'm curious to see if she asks Chase about his dad and/or talks to him about Aaron. And I don't think you talk too much in your notes at all.

OMG HOT CHAPTER :D

Terrific, fantastic, beautifully written chapter. I've read a lot of stories on here and I have to say I've never read one as good as yours. I can't wait till you updated next week! Oh and trust me you don't talk to much in your author's notes.

omg, really awesome chapter! please don't tell me it ends soon! this story honestly has the most chemistry ever out of all the stories I've ever read online or in book format...you should make it at least 15 chapters...15 looong chapters

Are we going to get a little scene with Aaron? that would put the cherry on the icing me thinks. lovely as always.

:D Omg Chase is so hot! Your writing is so real and believable- like the way Nala is nervous but can't resist Chase. It's so human, and your writing is consistent! :) Can't wait to read more. x

Have I ever mentioned that I AK so jealous of your writing, and I hope that soon I'll be as good as you? Your writing is truly excellent. I can't wait to see more of your work! :D