This story is probably going to be the reason why i fail my exams. but i love it.

cool chapter...Nala is coming off as mean though

Really, you are quite great at evolving this story, without any filling text that it's needed! I don't even really have any constructive criticism - I think I'll just let you update and brighten my Thursdays :b

I would love to see some photos of how you imagine Nala and Chase (and perhaps the others) to look like (:

Keep up the awesome work and happy writing (:

Hehehehe, rightly embarressed by their display! Loved it though, especially cause Chase jacked her phone hehe.

JM

Hmm I wonder what's up with Chase's dad. Oh and as usual, that was freaking hot, I'm smiling like a major perv right now, lol.

i was so happy when i saw in my mail that you updated.. same time with another fic that i loved reading too! OMG. i had to skip the hot and heavy parts because they'll make me hot and heavy and i'm trying to be reformed about reading these kinds of stuff. ANYWAYS, i love the chemistry between them, chase stealing her phone was totally funny too and the fact that they had a heavy make-out session AGAINST A SEE-THROUGH WALL WHERE EVERYONE CAN SEE THEM was hilarious. :)) i really love your updates! please keep updatin! :)

Yup, this chapter upped the hotness quotient. Damn near half the chapter was the store makeout and I did not mind in the least.

It looks like the outside world may start intruding in their little bubble. Also, my though was that his dad was in jail too but my guesses are always wrong so it will be something else.

and I had to look up monokini, I saw some very suspect pictures but I'm going with the more tasteful monokini pictures I saw for my girl Nala.

lol at Chase taking her phone. I am curious to know his next move, especially when they are in a somewhat equal playing field.

Um wow. That kissing scene was hot! Keep up the great work. Can't wait until next Thursday!(:

*sigh* Always leaving wanting more.

How many chapters did you say these were going to be? And dang, he finally found out her name! X3

Hmm, personal stuff is starting to seep in. Nice! Cant wait to read more next week, Im dying to know what happened to his dad.

Your amazingness always surprises me, with even more amazingness. - Cant wait for next week!

-Amy

this chapter was HOTTT once again great job ill be looking forward to the next chapter

this was HOTTT and i think you did very well considering you never did this before great job i am loving this story more and more )

i enjoy the fact that this story is full of surprises ) great job

i was shocked to find out that Excellence does the same thing i do, we both say "que" instead of what... thought i was the only one that did that lol anyway let the games begin )

this is so great that words cannot describe it but i think you did well with the formatting and Excellence is HOTTT... you are an amazing writer which you have probably heard many times before ) but im on to the next chapter