Reviews for Kissing Booth Princess |
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![]() ![]() ![]() dude, when are they going to meet? update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool, oh I mean hot, chapter. liked it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You managed to make it both hot AND cute. You made me like your lead guy which is a feat. Chase is all sexy, but somehow down-to earth while still not being too arrogant. He's perfect for sort of bringing Nala out of her shell, but just enough of an idiot for her to shut him down every now and then,lol. I loved it and you're fricking amazing at writing. Believe in yourself, dude:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I Love It So Far , Sheesh I Cant Wait Untill They Meet Up Face To Face Aqain.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Because I think that Nala may be a bit too shy to do it herself, I'll be mad at Chase on her behalf. He's just going to leave her hanging. Really? So he gets to go off and get her all hot and bothered, and then he just cuts it off? Tsk, tsk, tsk, not cool :b But lovely chapter. And you did the phone sex part just fine, I believe. It's great that Nala is inexperienced, because that's easy for me to relate to. Happy writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hihi...no don't die of shame just yet. It was a funny little scene, honestly, What really made me like it was Mum coming barging in with din-din. (Seriously - people say that? ) It made Chase so likable. Great phone-sex, really :)/ cheers, Java |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I'm loving this story! Its really well written, and the main characters are really well developed :D |
![]() ![]() That was hot! lol Can't wait for Nala and Chase to meet face to face :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah I stopped reading this. I usually like the while sex scenes in other stories and I understand it's your first time writing about this but eh phone sex (thumbs down) Sorry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Take a dirty picture for me, take a dirty picture! LOL, that song always gets stuck in my head. Omg Chase is such a dirty boy... I effing love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, it wasnt that bad. Actually it was pretty well written. :3 Seriously, you leave us wanting more. Its like, having a sample of ice cream at Baskin Robbins with the little spoon. And then not having enough money to buy a two scoop cone. So cant wait for next thursday. -Amy |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're WAY too hard on yourself! :P I wouldn't really know, I'm no expert on this um... subject matter? But it wasn't bad like "omg, I don't want to read this!" You didn't make Nala sound like a slut/change her character all of a sudden, you could still see that she was the same person and everything (what, with her hesitating and everything) so I think you wrote it well! Chase is such a joker, I'm sad to think that this is going to end in a few chapters :( UPDATE! (I logged on yesterday to see if you uploaded in the morning and was pretty disappointed but I check my email today and there it is :D) |
![]() ![]() ![]() What, never again, dead. What does that mean? Please continue I love it! :D |
![]() ![]() Freaky Freaky...haha Part of me thought she wouldn't go with it but I had a feeling that she would. I don't really know what to say...Before this I thought she was a boring person...now I'm thinking that she has a fun side but she's closed off...For some reason (I'm probably wrong) I think that she has personal issues and that she doesn't trust many people... Can't wait for next Thursday...Keep up the good work! :) :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! chase is too sweet! i LOVE him! and i feel sorry for nala cuz she is so friggin attracted to him. i like this writing style. i'm cool with it but that's just my opinion. |