oh my gosh he has a girl. the scum! she should totally send a bunch of text to that number and get his hide in trouble. i don't know why but i'm loving this story more than the pull of destiny. OH THE HORROR!

damn! they got it on! i love it so far!

loving this story can't wait to read more

That is hilarious! I love it! She should say yes. Just saying. Lol. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Um. WOW! I love this... I read through those three chapters and they are amazing... It's a fun, flirty, sexy read... and hilarious! This is really good. I love the crazy hot chemistry between the two... Can't wait for the fourth chapter. Phone sex, oh goodness gracious!

fun, fub, fun. great chapter. Like the teaser at the end.

I knew it wasnt his girlfriend. Oh wow, now I seriously cant wait for thursday. This story is like chocolate, addicting, sweet, and leaves you wanting more. Hm, I guess like sex. Anyways, thats besides the point, amazing job writing this.

Thanks for sharing your gift with the world.

I love this story! Stop doubting yourself. Honestly, I always notice if someone is struggling with 3rd person and all I thought with you was that your characters are interesting and real. You're a great writer and if you really think you need improvement, by all means. But know that your writing is fricking amazing as is:):)

AW why isn't it in first person, nala's pov?

I love Wanda!

The more that Chase speaks, the more he sounds like a creep. Even though that is the case, I still like Chase.

I love this chapter and I am predicting that I am going to enjoy the rest of the story. I can picture every scene and like the flow of the story.

Janelle, base on the information given so far is a sad excuse for a friend. I was shock to hear that Nala made the decision to continue to befriend Janelle.

"Excellence" is a mystery that I certainly would like to discover. Can't wait to find out who he is.

Side Note: Thank you for creating Black roles in your stories. I've read amazing stories on this website, and among all that I have read, two or three stories had characters where I felt represented. I know on your profile you state that you are "colorblind", nothing against you, but I hate hearing statements such as “I am colorblind”. By making that declaration, I feel as though people have the tendency of ignoring the issue. I agree that the color of my skin should not matter, but I cannot ignore the fact that there are times in which I am being judge.

Anyways, back to the review, I love your creative process and can't wait to read the rest of the chapters as well as start reading the other stories that you've written.

Hey! :D I just wanted to say if you think your writing lacks story description, or detail, you are sorely mistaken :]

I just wanted to leave a comment/review, telling you how charming I think your story is.

Not only that, but I absolutely adore Chase and Nalas' attitude, and how witty and humorous they are, something I think is really hard to come by in a lot of stories.

I think your doing a great job so far! :D

haha, oh goodness, chase. i honestly love these two, and i'm not sure what i can say that everyone else already hasn't but... amazing job! they're both realistic, and the dialogue flows wonderfully. 3 and also. i seriously signed up on fp just so i can properly review and follow your stories. 3

anyway, i can't wait to see more you. :) b

One of the best Kissing Booth stories I have read so far.

Super amazing! :) I really can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl