OMG I LOVE THIS. WOW! I could feel Excellence (as wierd as it sounds) you described it so awsome I can't even find the words to explain. Please keep writing this story because for some odd reasons these authors make like 5 chapters and up, then quit.

That was freaking hilarious! I love it so far :)

Why does he have to have a girlfriend? WHY? I was Nala to make his life living hell. And i really hope she doesnt do anything with him while he's still with his possible girlfriend.

hi,

Awesome story!

Good characters, awesome plot, and funny scenes that make me smile.

You defenitely made my fave-author list... Which is a short list...

Honestly I can't handle too much drama or sugar-sweet romances, I love good humour in stories, but unfortunataly comedy is hard to find on writing-sites.

So keep this up, people with funny-bones need stories like these!

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I love this story and think it's awesome!

cute, quirky, and so much fun to read. keep it coming. ;)

Damn and I was just starting to like him haha! I will not relinquish my like of Excellence yet (or Chase as you so lovely introduced his name) as I am sure you have tricks up your sleeve! Can't wait for more!

You are insane. Absolutely not a fail with the third person pow. I thought it was funny, cute, entertaining and hot, all you could wish for. I thorougly enjoyed the pre kiss exchange and excellence is excellent. - :)

Another lovely chapter! I even found myself chuckling a bit between their little spat over the phone lol and I suspect this mystery lady to be the mom! haha I'm pretty sure that's probably his mom;) but great update; can't wait to see more from you!

Xoxo only21

You second guessed yourself!

This story is getting good and this is just chapter 2, I LOVED IT. Keep it up :]]

Well then, Thursday is now officially my Favorite day! (the fact that its a weekend for us folks here is beside the point.:))

Stop being hard on yourself, mate. Your stories are uber-kewl, and your writing is really good, so there's absolutely no reason for you to be second guessing yourself.(if there's anybody second guessing themselves, it should be me.)

Awesome chapter! I love Nala and Excellence already!

P.S- know its too soon, but I can't wait to see what they look like! character pics?

My Tuesdays just lightened up (: I love to read the dialogue between Nala and Chase, it's excellent! Really. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep the good work up and happy writing :b

Oh, I like everything you come up with and this story is definitely not an expectation! I already like "Excellence" or Chase lol and I can't wait to see how he develops during the story and how their relationships goes as well. Keep up the good work!

I really don't know why you thought we wouldn't have liked this story. It's really good. I already like it and it's chapter 2 only. You have a way of writing that's so entertaining from the start; keep it up! :) Can't wait to read more about Chase. ;)

Until thursday :P,

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You're up to chapter SIX? 8O

Eek!

Great chapter.

Oh noes, no the airhead (presumed) girlfriend again.

Hmm, I don't think she's his girlfriend. I hope not.

LOL, of all the things to talk about, they talked about porn. Bahaha!