Ok so I've read this story about 50 times, and OH SWEET LORD I WANT A CHASE IN MY LIFE lol

You're an amazing writer! I'm SO picky about what I read, spelling, grammar, plot etc has to be brilliant for me to finish a story (otherwise it's just eye rape y'know?), and I've loved every story of yours that I've come across. I really hope you keep it going.
You should really think about getting published because there are some books that have been published and made MILLIONS with completely talentless authors and no plot whatsoever *cough* fifty shades of LAME *cough* and you're about 25 kajillion times better than half the crap out there! It'd be nice to get some real chick lit ESPECIALLY with more coloured characters - I'm a Pakistani girl brought up in the UK and totally colourblind too so I really love how you have a bit of diversity in your characters. :D

Anyway, that's the end of my worship/ranting. I REALLY wish you the greatest success with your writing.

Much love X

Make an epilogue!

I really like this story. There was one thing I noticed though, at the last paragraph, she says Chase rather than Excellence. He didn't tell her his name yet, so she doesn't know his name is Chase. Great work, though! I really like your writing style.

really not at home or at an inn or wherever decent? i thought at the beginning she wasn't a slut...wtf? only dogs do it in public places. :/

can't they please stop doing it in public? that is just really cheap IMO.

i only scanned the first half, too much talking nonsense again.

too bad she didn't get off LOL. oh well, i don't think she'll miss anything since it seems she doesn't know how to please herself anyway. nice chapter, really hot. 5 starts over 5! :)

i really didn't like the first half of this chapter. she & her mothers conversation was just basically a repeat of the last last chapter, and it was too boring and fluffy. that kind of conversation clicks on sitcoms but not really for "reading" you know what i mean? BUT the second half is great. :)

I'm so glad I checked this story out after I've been reading your current one. Nala and Chase really got me. I loved Chase's personality throughout the whole story, it was hilarious and very consistent. I really loved the ending, I'm glad Nala and Chase are giving a relationship a chance. Amazing story, very entertaining and the plot was really good.

Utterly amazing.

HOLY CRAP! This chapter must inspired to call my man and talk dirty to him...now he's taking me shopping as my reward!

Thanks so much xoxo

This story is perfect. It is my dream story. I have been searching for a story like this for so long... quirky, cute, sexy but with serious issues. And the best part? CHASE HAS THE SAME SURNAME AS ME. THAT MEANS WE COULD BE SECRETLY MARRIED.

Brilliant work :D

Hey! I really love this story :) great job! :D i love chase's personality xD and i like your plot :) hehe... Anyway, i hope you make a sequel to this :P hehe :) i kinda want to know how their relationship flourishes and all xD but great ending :P anyways, i want to read your other stories but can't decide which one to read first :P what's your favorite story? Which story do you think i should read?:)

OMG! i loved it! one of the best fictions i have read online! XD

I will definitely read some more of your stuff.

btw. just in case you hadn't noticed... you said: 'Wrapping his arm around my waist, Chase smiled back at Santana and said'

i do believe that the story is in 3rd person and you might want to correct that tiny mistake. (don't worry, i only noticed because i read this story a couple of times over)

other than that, I give it 10 out of 10... or even more?

I really liked this. It was funny, and sexy, and cute; all in all, just a great read. I think Chase and Nala are adorable, and I'll probably re-read this quite a few times. Thanks for writing. Later.

~ Malice