Wow, I've not visited fictionpress for a very long time and I found this one. It's a really cool story. It shows how life is very much different how it was portrayed on television shows. You know the thing between best friends stealing the boyfriend, and then at the end they would forgive each other. That is total shit. It's nice to see Nala standing up for herself and realizing things that has been in front of her the whole time. Chase has made her a better person and the end is just so nice without really a happy ending that they live happily ever after but the end shows a promise that eventually they would have theirs.

Oh well, I would have liked to see Aaron and Janelle breaking up eventually, but that's not necessary anymore, Nala found her happiness already. O-M-GEE Lumpia! I love eating lumpia. Really taste good especially the ones made by my tita(auntie) in the Philippines. YUMMY. So yes, I would very much like a Chase for a boyfriend but not his seducing ways. Anyway I love your story and I'm sure the others too, because you would not have that many reviews if not.

Lazy as I am I decided to leave only one review forgive this lazy-ass.

Oh my gosh, I loved it! It was so good. I'm excited to read your other stuff now! Keep up the great work!

This was a really fun chapter! I like 'Excellence' too. Nala seems like she needs that kind of guy in her life.

That was so 3pic. Like the best story I have EVER read.

Thank you.

a sequel...would be freaking fantastic. pleasepleaseplease do one. i just read this entire story in like...2 hours and i'm ready for more so anytime you want to go on to write a sequel, i'm ready (already put you on author alert).

seriously though. great story.

Sooooo Excellent! This was just...smh I dont have words for how much I loved this! Man! please do a sequel or something ,if you haven't already! This had me laughing and crying so much! OMG! Your freakin Awesome!

signed: A New Fan.

QUE! wAT R U TALKING ABOUT! "EPIC FAIL" tHI SWAS HOT!

and I love this mystery guy...a girl's gotta have "friends" rite! lol

Im loving this start off! and its only chappie 1!

Another great story!

awesome i love chase he is so funny damn make a sequel pretty pls

okay well i just read your story whole story in what...less than 3-4 hours, i love it! you should so do a sequel!

Hayley York

I just read this whole story and loved it! You popped my fiction press story cherry! :) I wanted to complement you on making the experience amazing! Is this awkward for you yet? Well loved the story and am about to read all of your other stuff! :D

haha xD loved this story ! it was funny, adorable and let not forget HOT AS HELL ;D loved that the characters had a past.. made them seem more real !

Damn just finished reading this story! And i really loved every bit of it.

It was awesome, and gosh Chase and Nala are simply too cute together.

They are fated XD

this story was awesomely written and i loved every bit of it...even the suspense parts ;p thanks for writing it :) xx

FuckingFantasticEnding...Wow ths has got to be one of the BEST stories ive read on fanfic..thank you for makin it enjoyable)Cnt wait to read more of ur 'artwork')(after my final-exams,ofcourse)