Reviews for Deep Breath Scream
veda-p chapter 12 . 11/22/2011
This is so absolutely beautiful. Its like a leaf of a life, like a scrapbook of memories written in words. Very, very good.

If I could suggest one thing, it would be to be a little more careful with punctuation, because often it elevates the emotion and gives the reader a sense of completion when used properly. Other than that, its amazing!
E. Belle chapter 8 . 4/28/2011
How creepy! My cousin's names are Beth and Cris... Anyway, good job on the stories, I really enjoy reading them!
E. Belle chapter 4 . 4/24/2011
Nice job! I like how you're keeping each story short, though I do wish that a few of them were expanded on a little better. I'll be looking forward to the next ones!
TakeMyHandHoldItTight chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
I liked how you wrote the thought process near the end, but I found the plot a bit confusing.