|Reviews for Atlanta|
| The Autumn Queen chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Now this one was cute. And nicely spaced. Maybe because the protagonist is so young, and the whole fantasy element to the story too. I coudn't help but notice for some reason that you've spelt corridors "cooridors.' Also, that first line in scene 3, who is Crystal talking to? Herself, ie. the audience? Or can the doctors hear and understand her. Because they say "understand", not "speak" which would be more phenomenal.
| Sophia Alexandra chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
good story. you should really do something with your writing. i think you have a lot of potential