Reviews for Sarah
tolerate chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
I know it is so cliché

To write about a past lover

But if I may

Speak about how much I love her

With her smile,

like a glimpse of the sun

-I like this part the most. And the ending:

Only to find

Why she strayed

Her heart was not with mine

The poem is really, really great. Thanks for writing! I like how you express those feelings in calm and expressive words! I can relate to this as well.