Reviews for Half Empty Glass
Akshat chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
very well written... it certainly is gripping implying that you have an amazing writing style but the ending disappointed me. you left a reader very very curious to know what happens to the guy. and when he gets no reply, a reader is disapponited
RenewedTruth chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Boring, the ''bar host'' was the date.
Who Is This Girl Anyway chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
This is pretty good. There's a spelling mistake(Madam and Madame mean two very different things) but you've established Veronica's personality well and the writing is good. Best of luck if you continue this.
Michael Kelso chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Interesting. I was waiting for the rest. I suppose you left us at the same place he left her, waiting for something that wasn't going to happen. The story was quite good, very discriptive. You strung us along emotionally, making us feel sorry for the woman when he doesn't show. I know I wondered where he had gone, what had happened to him. I even went so far as to think up some possible reasons for him not to show up. Very good story, it had me hooked.