Reviews for Bubble's Babble
Squiggles the Red Panda chapter 3 . 5/13/2011
Overall, have to say that these were really good. All of them were fun to read. Good job!
Sepulchred chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
It's an intriguing little thing, this baby. If you really are twelve, I have to commend you. I could never have written that well when I was twelve. The only thing I could critique on is something you probably can't do anything about, which is that there is a sense of childishness in the narration. The fact that you're really young shines through, but it's not necessarily a bad thing. It's a good effort.