This is absolutely adorable, and I won't complain about any add -ns :D

wow dat was SOOOOOOOOO cute
ofcourse kiss scene plz :P

One of the best romantic one shots I've read.

Haha. I was originally just going to repay a review, but man. I really liked this story. Now if only... haha. It made me all warm and gooey inside. So thank you. I will proceed to read the rest of your stuff. Just I hope you will mine. Thats all, thanks! -Thalia Bryne

Amazing what a little honesty can accomplish. A very enjoyable story. It would make a great movie if it were expanded, with this as the climactic ending.

Thanks for an enjoyable read.

Aw! So cute it gave me warm fuzzies! Definitely add a kiss scene. *Sigh* That was the most adorable letter ever...

That was so cute! Loved Xander!

I don't review many stories; I'm very picky actually, but damn.

Your story- I just /couldnt/ leave it. I swear, one of the most heart-warming and adorable stories EVER. I couldn't help but get that lil' warm fuzzy feeling inside my heart and going 'aww' as the story proceeded so I just wanted to tell you excellent story : )And I hope to see more from you!

-sigh- Now, if all the guys could write a letter as sweet as that. Too bad there aren't many Xanders left in the world. I loved your one-shot! It was very sweet and had me smiling from beginning to end.

stop wiggling your eyebrows..its hilarious...nice btw. good read

cute and just long enough and very well-written

argh! you made me to want more!XD it's so cute! i love it!

I liked the entire love letter. It was sweet, honest, so earnest. And written very realistically like any shy, nervous teenaged boy. I appreciate how you incorporated her reaction to each line too, especially the surprise that someone actually looked past her beauty.

Now, Fallen is supposedly this hot chick. Every hot chick knows she's a hot chick, lemme tell you. Haha! I understand why she would be curious, though. I just wished you fleshed out how she fought against the curiosity and eventually found herself gravitating towards the unknown boy. I think a less fast, more natural progression would make this already cute story into a more realistic and fantastic one-shot.

Hope this helps. Cheers!

wow that was cute