Beautifully written, this is the first story that I've thoroughly enjoyed in a long time. You really do take the time to give each character a personality that is unique and consistent, and I absolutely love that! The romance between Alex and Callie is develops in such a gorgeous way. And there are several things that I did not see coming, including Damon being present during the fight at the end. Please please please give us part 2 soon, I don't know how long I can wait! And Merry Christmas!

Amazing story!

I absolutely loved this story... Honestly when i read this summary i didn't think the plot would turn out to be this amazing... there are no words to express how much i loved it! You are a wonderful writer.. and Ur depth of characters is just awesome. i could clearly picture everyone of them..And i have to tell you Damon was by far my favorite character even though Alex and Callie were the lead (they were great too)... But i love Damon :D

This story is amazing! It feels like I'm reading a real novel! It's the best I've ever seen on one of these sites. Keep writing you have a gift!

your writing style is engaging

WOW! This story was sooo good!

cool story

I really like this chapter! Who knocked Callie out? I think that Alex and Callie should be a couple!

Can't wait to read more and find out who knocked Callie. I think thad Alex treats Callie like she is a little kid, but I still think they would be a gre8t couple! xD

First off this is a really good story and, because of finals, I chose a horrible time to read it. That aside, this impressed me. The characters are well done, and it actually looks like you put a lot of time and thinking into the plot. Great job!

Also, I was wondering, if you had time, could you possibly review one of my stories? Thanks.

Yay! Review 100. I love this story, the plot is very interesting and I find the characterization to be very well done!

I LOVE IT! such as awesome read. cant wait for other stories similar to this!

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I think it's like very epic, in new york. I think it's worthy of a movie! I think the depth of the characters and where you've taken them is very good! You've really built on this... The characters and everything. There is a lot of complexity.

It's very realistic for what goes on in high school! And the dynamics that go on between people at that age. Very good.

Very intense. I would buy this book. I love the descriptions of the characters were very intense. The experience that she's having that brought to the realization that she was adopted was excruciating for her.

Amazing! Very intense, a lot of emotional impact with family. How dysfunctional it can be. The devil thing. Is she the devil? Or do all of us have the devil in us. I'm totally inspired by your brilliance.