Reviews for American Arcane |
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zackatack7 chapter 2 . 3/17/2012 Plot holes a little more serious than last chapter. After a Federal Agent gets kidnapped by a wanted figure, her first move upon escape shouldn't be to help a PI with a case. Ignoring the obvious move of using a police radio to call in backup to apprehend the criminal (solving the case in the meantime) makes it difficult to think of everything following as an excuse to develop character. |
zackatack7 chapter 1 . 3/16/2012 Good story. Lots of plot holes, but very few typos, and very entertaining on the whole. Was looking for something Dresden-esque, and while it's a little rough, I certainly found it. |
Jave Harron chapter 2 . 6/6/2011 Okay, this is a rather rare series of yours, focusing on modern/near future times (and alternating between both) rather than a space opera or historical epoch. I am liking the continuity with your awesome Stein-verse (especially everyone's favorite Voodoo Villain). Keep up the good work. |