this is great, thanks!

You know what I like most about your writing? It's all so unique and that just makes it hotter ;) I also enjoy the way you put smut and plot together. Veryyy good.

This is really good, there must be mote to this story. Hope you add more to this :D

I like the story so far. I'm guessing Devlin isn't exactly human. I'm interested to read more and find out what he is.

One thing though there's a part where it says "his breasts spilling over his hands" but it should probably be her breasts. Other wise I like it.