halo author, my name is Dina, an editor for a fast growing platform, i am so interested in your work, may i know how to reach you professionally?

This is like awesomely refreshing. I think Aleksi is hilarious. It's also well written and doesn't make me want to shoot my brains out every time I see grammar and spelling mistakes...

Anyway, the character developement feels like it's drawing me in. I've always thought twins are kind of interesting. And I love the German kid. I've also had similiar experiences eating in a school library.

You said that you have rough drafts of the rest of it or something? I'd definitely be interested in reading anything you would give me. I guess I have trouble waiting once I start getting into a story. Although maybe it would be better to just wait... I don't know; I'm conflicted. Haha.

My point is, thanks for writing and I like it a lot. :)

I'm not trying to discourage you from writing because i think you have talent. But please be aware that there is a fine line between quirky or interesting, and downright annoying or idiotic. Your main character has crossed that line, making this story not enjoyable to read for me. She is coming across as manic and almost bipolar and i find myself just switching off when she over-reacts to the smallest thing. I want to tell her to get over herself. That's not a good feeling to have towards the person narrating the story.

Yay, I love your decision! I can't wait to re-read the story and to find out, what the ending will be :) Don't get discouraged that the masses didn't give a welcome back here in the reviews! I'm sure there are still a few out there really interested in this story.
(and please do excuse my english, I am only german myself and still learning )

what the hell. why did you decide not to post anymore? what a waste of a good story

Oh I like this a lot. I like how grumpy and pissed off the narrator is. I shall look forward to reading more:)

Suki

Definitely did not see that coming.

I'm glad that you updatead. By now, I have no idea what's going to happen next. I hope Aleksi gets professional help and Kaspar breaks up with him. Good luck with your finals. If there's more, I look forward to read it. I think your writing has improved throughout the story and I really enjoyed reading it.

im kind of confused with this story.

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ok yay youre back. i was beginning to think something happened to you, but i understand people have got lives too. though i swear to god if u dont finish this im gonna just choke on my own tears. can i just say your writing has improved a lot? i feel as if u have a more distinct style now. but omg nooooo what is going on in here. not gonna lie i was extremely turned on by aleksi burning his name on kaspars hips but also extremely worried bcos their relationship is extremely unhealthy (extreme use of extremely). i honestly have no idea whats going to happen next, im terrible at predictions, but i will be anticipating the next update. uvu

Aleksi really needs therapy. I doubt he's going to get it, but sheesh.

I feel like I need to reread this in its entirety. I keep thinking back to the original snark machine he was in the first couple of chapters and wondering what happened, and I can't puzzled out if it was a believable shift or not, probably because of the updating schedule. You'll probably see a PM from me later once I get a chance to do that.

Are you going to finish the story?

Dogs eat credit cards all the time Not that I would know. I don't have a dog... I love how it switched between past and present, back and forth It really added to the effect of it all! XD

I feel like such an ass... I haven't been on fictionpress for months... *cries in corner* Yeah, I do suck at ranting I try not to rant too much and then it just ends up sounding pathetic... I rant better in real life

I must say that I really like this chapter, because the story just turns in another direction and the end about their dad helps me to understand Aleksi's feelings. I'm not that angry with him, I can understand his actions to a certain point, I just really like Aleksandr. I don't even know why, but he's my favourite characters in this story. :)
I got so many chocolate. But it's definetely not too much, it will be gone in short time.
Great chapter, I'm really happy right now, with all my chocolate and also reading a great story. :)

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAA AAAHHHHHHHHH. WHAT IS HAPPENNEING M Y BRAIN CANNOT EVEN VCOMPREHEND. okay. so. wow. MAJOR development! this story is going in a complete different direction than (or then, idk) i originally thought but that isnt necessarily bad! im slightly confused but im 3478% certain all will be explained soon so i shant ask. and wow i can see how your writing is gradually getting better (not that it wwas bad before)! like wow, its so descriptive; i feel like im there. and the feeling you put into it omg.. and is aleksandr depressed because if he is i wiLL FLIP ALL THE TABLES. okay i lied so the twins' father was shot?! by who?! like what?/ ahhh. was he in like a gang or something? and you said thered be kaspy but there wasnt so hopefully you meant next chapter (THICK LAYER OF HINT HINT). lol german is such a silly language. but now i sorta want to learn it. just. German! :DD hahahaha everthing has red squiggles under this but idont really care. seeing that this updated made me feel so happy. UvU rock on, girl. and ohhhh, different povs is nice. also, do you listen to music while writing? and if you do, what type/what songs?