Reviews for Revenge
3M2R chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
the repetitions were simple, but do create the feeling. sinister. (: insta-favourite

There's something i like about your work, the simplicity of the write, vocabulary wise. the meaning may be simple, but you have conveyed it through so little words (because most of them are repetitions).
FixitfelixJRJRJR chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
Again, the free verse is a bit overdone, at least to me. I kind of enjoy flow in poetry, but I'm not saying a lack of it is bad. I liked the repitition of the first lines. One question: why did revenge have periods in between the letters?