I really love this story. it's so perfectly made I should be bowing down to you. it's just so perfect, all of it
xoxo

I found this story really cute and short! Is it completed? Or no? Either way its really good and you should consider a sequel! Hayit'sSerenity

hahah i like felix so much he is fun ;)
update soon :D

wish u had more reveiws dis book is wonderful :DD

It was too short! Give us something to hang by!

Where was the spirit you started off with in the brginning of the story?

We need that!

Put more into it and your audience will give you more for it!

I think I mentioned in my last review that I'm only keeping you on my alert list to help you- and I'm doing just that.

If you think I'm being to harsh, go ahead and tell me and I will stop reviewing.

I guess this story would be good if you didn't make it go SO fast! Take it a bit slower- add more about this Felix guy- isn't it meant to be about him? More sections.

Give us more and we will return the favour.

Overall good job for taking the time to write and to create this idea into a story.

I liked this chapter alot. The descriptions are getting better. My fav at the end is "a ghost of a smile..." :)

I really like the relationship between Felix and Natalie but it seems too good to be true.

Wow, this was exactly the type of story I was looking for and I'm extremely glad that you wrote it! It's the perfect way for me to spend my time not doing the homework I'm supposed to be doing. I hope that there will be some conflicts though, because although it's very refreshing to see something so down-to-earth and realistic, I feel that it will become boring if it's too easy. There are a few mistakes in the word choices because of how similar they sound, but nothing that stunts the reading. I love it!

Awwwww! That's soo cute!

Nudge: imma 'bout ta passs out from the cutenessss!

Heck yeah! And I'm so sorry I was MIA. My iPod doesn't like loading your story for some reason. -sadness-

great job! Update asap please!

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Okay, first I'd like to say that I'm happy I got a shout out in the previous chapter cuz i really do like this story lol so ya :D update again soon!

awww..so sweet!

Cute. I assume most of us would enjoy it more if it were longer

Ah, this story is fantastic. XD I love it so much. It makes me laugh tons, and the chick is extrememly similar to myself outside of grades and looks. XD Keep writing, take however long you want, it's your story, not the readers, and don't apologize for anything. :P XD Luck!

Oh, wow. Now this, I like. I like this a lot. I like your writing style, I like your characterisations, and I even like the setting. (I usually hate high-school romance stories. Partly because I'm British, I never went to 'high school' or dealt with all that stuff, and partly because I'm no longer of that age :P). Anyway, your story... Just, the way you've set this up and started telling the story... well, it must be good, as I'm sitting here at half three in the morning meaning to go to bed, but I keep reading. *rubs eyes*. Can't promise I'll get through much more tonight, but this was good.

Although I must admit that I felt a little shamefaced at your brief comment on student-teacher cliched stories, namely because I'm writing one. Ha! But, no matter :)

I usually try to incorporate some kind of constructive criticism into my reviews, even if it's just comments on typos. But there's not much I could pick out here, I just found myself enjoying it more than anything else (which is good!). One thing I will mention is that from when it started I imagined it was an older woman, maybe in her late twenties/early thirties. I've no idea why, and that might just have been me, but maybe that's worth commenting on.

Felix's name is a delight. As it Padric's, really. I really like how your characters feel three-dimensional already, even though it's only the first chapter. Even Maddy felt totally like flesh and blood and she was only mentioned for a few lines.

Anyway. I'm rambling. If I find something to con-crit I'll let you know, but so far, it's just enjoyable and light-hearted and fun :)

~Roxie H.

I loved this chapter, honestly. I love the dialog and such :) If I'm being honest, i really like the part:

"I like when you blush," Felix said, which, of course, only made it worse. I wondered not for the first time how he managed to say things like that and get away with them.

"Uhm. I don't really know what the proper response to that is."

"You could thank me," he suggested.

"Or I could change the subject to something less embarrassing, like math. Let's talk math."

-I guess it's just cuz I've been in... many of those conversations and they always turn out awkward and it's kinda funny... course he says dirty things which I don't know have responses to. Lol. Update soon!

I'm pretty sure that you need to update really soon cuz i like LOVE this story...i was gonna update on ch 3 again but no, FP wouldnt have that so yeah lol